5.05.2004

the five things i can't mayterm without

ok. i'm on drugs right now so bare.....hahaaha.....with me. pleese. ambien. i'm so hardcore aseoxm.

dignal cut and colored my hair yesterday. red of course. i feel punkier. and feell unalbe ot focus on typing, obviously. the screen keeps swimming around. rrrr.

i read kevin write's dating book in almost one sitting except i had to sit in two places. but as far as i am concerned, it still counts.

there was plenty of IWU humor, and plain good sarcastic wit that one cannot do without of course. twas a very good effort, though i would consider it very rough around the edges. it was in dire need of an editor. kevin seemed well researched, anxious (sometimes overly) to show both sides unbiasedly, though i felt that often he showed the extreme example when the average would have done nicely. extremes are few and far between. averages are average for a reason.

plus there was just gramatical problems, sentence structure, puncuation mishaps.....the big thing for me was that he donated an entire chapter to generalizations, but later in the book he takes it up again as a new subject with "women are dating jesus" vs "guys never ask me out". instead of arguing the reader through WHY these statements (which are generalizations) are wrong to use, maybe kevin should use parts of it to conclude or further beef up the generalization chapter. it just seemed like i was reading it out of place in the book.

often, the way he words sentences bothers me a little becuase it's not bad, so much, as it could be better. often he seems on the verge of grammatical suicide. assuming, of course, there would be such a thing. i'm really woozsy.

i wonder if i will wake up tomorrow and not remember any of this, and hope that it didnt happen. or. um.

now that i am seeing double, i believe it's time to go to bed. that's what sleeping pills do.

next time i take ambien right before blogging, i should blog about the experience. its fun. interesting. some of my head feels fuzzy right now. fuzzy and numb. and all the lines i am typing are floatin off the screen. forward and backwards. sometimes towards the bed, but lots of times towards my face, and that's a littl ebit freaky deaky.

gnight.

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